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Russ Isabella wrote:
I guess it depends on what you mean by dramatic, but this doesn't work for me because the only thing that could be construed as dramatic is the absence of color. To my eye, dramatic requires a source of tension, so maybe we need to see what's going on in front of him as he attempts to inbound the ball. And why cut off so much of his body? I'm not saying the choices you've made here are wrong, but you should have reasons for each of them, all contributing to the goal you've set for the image. Just because I'm not seeing them doesn't mean they aren't there, but good images tell their own stories....Show more →
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P Alesse wrote:
Nate... I think Russ is on the mark with having a plan, but I also think that sometimes a plan can formulate while in the moment too...
For me, the unbalanced crop is creating a distraction for me. I think the back shot could have potential and I like the B/W treatment, but the way you have cropped it is what's causing the most distress.
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kateman wrote:
Nate,
just take a look the images captured by these two photographers. both of them have superb eyes. they know of what they speak.
FWIW, i like the image.
keep sharing
b
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schlotz wrote:
Nate, you couldn't have received better input. Both Russ & Paul are spot on. The positive take away here is that you are attempting, and now have something more to incorporate for the next try. Never stop shooting, never stop learning.
Trust me, the images the photographers above always leave me in awe and I could not express how much I appreciate the feedback I have received. If they weren't honest, I would never have a need to improve and I cant thank all of you enough for speaking truthfully! As always, ya live and ya learn. In comparison to many of the sports shooters on here, I am still a little baby and I have TONS to learn. Thanks!
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