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Paul,
1 - Clone the branch in upper-left and rock in lower-right - I feel these both distract. Might need a little NR. Have you thought about a mono conversion?
2 - I like it. Very painterly and pleasing IMO. I'd clone the darker tan/brown blob at the edge in the upper-right.
3 - I feel the patch of sky is distracting and doesn't fit with the rest of the image, especially abstract. The change in color and texture is too jarring/distracting for me.
4 - I always love eddies, especially in mono! You've got a nice flow through the image following the curves of the eddies. I'd look to see how a less contrasty version would look as I'm seeing almost no midtones. Maybe a lil sharpening to boot?
Fun set!
Cheers,
Jeff
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