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beanpkk wrote:
Walter,
Interesting image. To my eye it looks a bit oversharpened, and the vignette seems a bit heavy-handed. Maybe a sepia tone would work better than b/w? The only other nit I have is that the line ends on the RHS of the frame but not on the left. With the right-most person in the line partially hidden behind leaves, and the cannon carriage on the RHS is only partly there, the image might support a crop so that the end of the line doesn't show, which would give it a little more symmetry and perhaps encourage the feeling that the line is very long.
You mentioned other images with the cannons...I'd like to see one of those too. Must have been fun to be there. Love the tents in the background.
These are just my two cents.
keith
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Thanks Kieth for commenting, I see what you mean about the right side of the frame. I wasn't sure what would be thought of sepia, that is what I originally had it in. Second guessed myself out of it I also lightened the vignette a little. Good points.
The night fire shot I was pushing my camera pretty heavy at 6400 ISO, so the shot has some noise. Cleaned some up in LR. The second canon was fun because all the accoutrements present.
Thanks for looking.
Walt
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