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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Cat Portrait


This is my kitten Pancho, 7 months old and his 1st portrait (it didn't last long). Below is Simon, our oldest.
I shot these with a 600EX Rt off camera (slight left) with some diffused window light to the right! I just got the ST E3 from another member here on the forums and am just beginning to learn it. Although I like this image I am open to all suggestions using the ST E3 ( I have 2 600's)
Thanks in advance,
Stuart











Edited on Dec 29, 2015 at 10:26 PM · View previous versions



Dec 29, 2015 at 01:40 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Cat Portrait


Looks good to me! Good pose and composition too.


Dec 29, 2015 at 01:42 PM
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Ok, I'll throw this out to see if anyone agrees.

#1. The face looks a little "hot" or bright. Needs a little more space at top and left, I think.

#2. Print it and get it up on the wall. I'm not sure there is any need to comment further!

Gene



Dec 30, 2015 at 02:16 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Cat Portrait


Very good. I agree that the face on Pancho is little bit too hot for my taste maybe bring that down a little? Body is lighted very nicely.
The lighting on Simon is perfect in my view but I would crop it so the empty space would be on the left side rather than on the right side. And maybe crop it in 4:3 ratio.
Just my taste.

These are perfectly fine as is.



Dec 30, 2015 at 02:53 PM





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