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Playing this morning with the Monthly Assignment, Empty. Would this be empty? Jim






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Dec 07, 2015 at 06:18 AM
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Ha-ha! I like it!

If you could reshoot with less light or maybe just burn the image down, I think it would make this a little stronger.

Excellent take on the assignment!

Dave

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Dec 07, 2015 at 07:07 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Cerebral Void- Updated


Great concept
Any room on the top?
I think Dave means burn. I would burn (darken) the background to black or near black
Also might consider BW conversion.
Not fond of the flashlight color although it deserves some attention. If staying in color I might change it to a black, gray or gunmetal blue.

Scott



Dec 07, 2015 at 07:57 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Cerebral Void- Updated


Too funny ... roflmao :-)


Dec 07, 2015 at 09:10 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Cerebral Void- Updated


sbeme wrote:
I think Dave means burn. I would burn (darken) the background to black or near black

Scott


Ooops... my bad.
I fixed that.

Dave



Dec 07, 2015 at 09:24 AM
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lighthound wrote:
Ha-ha! I like it!

If you could reshoot with less light or maybe just burn the image down, I think it would make this a little stronger.

Excellent take on the assignment!

Dave

Thanks Dave. I will try again, , more seriously. I was just playing with the idea but I'll give it more time and see what develops. Jim



Dec 07, 2015 at 10:34 AM
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sbeme wrote:
Great concept
Any room on the top?
I think Dave means burn. I would burn (darken) the background to black or near black
Also might consider BW conversion.
Not fond of the flashlight color although it deserves some attention. If staying in color I might change it to a black, gray or gunmetal blue.

Scott


Thanks Scott. Since the idea was well accepted I will give it another go... Jim



Dec 07, 2015 at 10:35 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Cerebral Void- Updated


RustyBug wrote:
Too funny ... roflmao :-)


My goal has been accomplished...



Dec 07, 2015 at 10:37 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Cerebral Void- Updated


Clever idea


Dec 07, 2015 at 11:25 AM
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ben egbert wrote:
Clever idea


Thanks Ben



Dec 07, 2015 at 11:33 AM
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I would shoot it without the flashlight being on, the hot spot its causing on the side of the head makes it hard to fathom that its going through with that much luminance...I do like the idea though.

Is that you BTW? Its always funny to "know" people in a forum setting but never know what they look like...you get a mental picture formed by your imagination...



Dec 07, 2015 at 01:29 PM
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Travis Rhoads wrote:
I would shoot it without the flashlight being on, the hot spot its causing on the side of the head makes it hard to fathom that its going through with that much luminance...I do like the idea though.

Is that you BTW? Its always funny to "know" people in a forum setting but never know what they look like...you get a mental picture formed by your imagination...


Thank you Travis. I agree with you completely and am going to shoot it over. Yes that is me. Jim



Dec 07, 2015 at 01:41 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Cerebral Void- Updated


Here is an updated image. I realize the light beam is not centered but I wanted your opinion as to if I was going the right way?







Dec 07, 2015 at 01:52 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Cerebral Void- Updated


that one works much better IMO.


Dec 07, 2015 at 02:06 PM
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p.1 #15 · p.1 #15 · Cerebral Void- Updated


much better processing and great expression
beam appears aimed too high and a bit toward the back of the head rather than more symmetrically and directly through the void...uh, ears

Scott

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Dec 07, 2015 at 03:32 PM
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p.1 #16 · p.1 #16 · Cerebral Void- Updated


Yup! I like your re-shoot much better! This is going to go over big I think.

Fantastic idea Jim.

Dave



Dec 07, 2015 at 03:33 PM
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p.1 #17 · p.1 #17 · Cerebral Void- Updated


Shouldn't we see some backlighting of the eyeballs?


Dec 07, 2015 at 04:56 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Cerebral Void- Updated


ben egbert wrote:
Shouldn't we see some backlighting of the eyeballs?







Dec 07, 2015 at 04:59 PM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Cerebral Void- Updated


Travis Rhoads wrote:
that one works much better IMO.


Thank you Travis



Dec 07, 2015 at 06:01 PM
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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · Cerebral Void- Updated


ben egbert wrote:
Shouldn't we see some backlighting of the eyeballs?


That is a great idea. Thank you. Jim



Dec 07, 2015 at 06:02 PM
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