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1. Great subject, nice detail, like the contrast. The falloff into darkness is too extreme and the hands feels cut off, disembodied.
2. similar to Jeff's reaction. I think there is too much competition between the stairs and architectural detail in the back. What is your primary subject and how can you lead to it or contain the eye there? Is it the stairs/walls or the structure? Some choices, cropping needed. I like the toning and sketched look of the processing both of which seem well suited to the subject
3. Again, including too much. Where do you want the eye to go (both the viewers' and the horse's?). I would crop a bit from the left, and about half way from the right through the white patch. Processing is good but I wish you had more DOF on the left, even with a crop there.
4. Over-sharpened. No engagement with the subject.
5. Cluttered scene. a bit soft, I can imagine it being an important and memorable event but it would be nice to have a bit more story in the image. A peak off the left to the stage, crowd, lights, etc.
Scott
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