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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · My First Post Here


Shot with D700/24-70 2 off cam SB910. Please feel free for comment, I'm here to learn







Nov 30, 2015 at 10:40 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · My First Post Here


For me the hot spot lighting on the right and the resulting shadowed faces takes away from what is otherwise a lovely photo


Nov 30, 2015 at 11:13 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · My First Post Here


The sky behind them is really lovely. Their pose is good, though some would argue that his right hand position is bad (there is just a hand, no arm appearing behind her). The general composition of them against the background is good as well.

However, I agree with Vcook about the lighting. It is too small (making the shadows harsh). Also his face is deeply shadowed and her face is lit from an awkward angle because of where the light is. Or to put it another way, the light should have been bigger (e. g. softbox or other modifier), closer (or it will still be harsh), higher (maybe slightly above them?) and closer to the camera so that both faces are evenly lit.

That would leave the grass unlit. That might be OK, or you might need a second light.

Another alternative, given the lovely background would be no light at all and go for a silhouette. Actually, you wouldn't want to pass up this photo. A silhouette would be something you would want in addition.

Thanks for sharing.

Dave



Dec 01, 2015 at 12:21 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · My First Post Here


Thanks for your input guys, very very helpful


Dec 01, 2015 at 07:15 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · My First Post Here


Very nice picture and I agree with the dust spots.

Marcelo



Dec 01, 2015 at 04:30 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · My First Post Here


Lovely capture! Just fix the dust spots.


Dec 02, 2015 at 05:53 PM





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