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The sky behind them is really lovely. Their pose is good, though some would argue that his right hand position is bad (there is just a hand, no arm appearing behind her). The general composition of them against the background is good as well.
However, I agree with Vcook about the lighting. It is too small (making the shadows harsh). Also his face is deeply shadowed and her face is lit from an awkward angle because of where the light is. Or to put it another way, the light should have been bigger (e. g. softbox or other modifier), closer (or it will still be harsh), higher (maybe slightly above them?) and closer to the camera so that both faces are evenly lit.
That would leave the grass unlit. That might be OK, or you might need a second light.
Another alternative, given the lovely background would be no light at all and go for a silhouette. Actually, you wouldn't want to pass up this photo. A silhouette would be something you would want in addition.
Thanks for sharing.
Dave
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