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Brev00 wrote:
This is interesting with a lot of components. I do not mind the power lines at all as I find they create a nice accent, a subtle point of focus in a rather diverse scene. I am not as fond of the foreground fence. The curved shape brings my attention to it as if I wish I could straighten it out or make it disappear. Maybe a wider or lower view to include more of it and the cabins. On the whole, for me, it does not quite gel. My overall sense is that I would like to see a shot of just the mountains, simple but with all the complexities of the varied lines and shapes. ...Show more →
Thanks for your thoughts and critic Brev00. This old fence was actually built along a small and curved road that seats on a small hill, with the chalets behind, further down. I myself had some other chalets on my back, so not too many options to frame this unfortunately. I tried to exclude the road, wlhile keeping the curved fence as an interesting FG element. Yet I can see through your comment that it may also act as a distraction.
Let me know what do you think of the cropped version.
santiago
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