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elorablue wrote:
Really like these. #1 has a great feel to it and #3 is a good pose. She is absolutely stunning but I didn't need to tell you that.
The only thing that bothers me is the background. Not sure why, maybe too "solid" and cuts a few of the shots right in the middle.
I like the idea behind the shoot. Try some shots the minute she wakes up
Great job.
Thank you for the positive feedback! The natural light in her apartment was constraining shooting directions and framing a bit. I was hoping for a cloudy day but we got sunlight which was more restrictive.
sasho_p wrote:
Superb quality and usage of the natural light. I love the idea behind those. Maybe some shots with her lying down on the couch or a bed could be more "lazy", or is it out of your concept ? A cup of tea/coffee for her to hold might add some sunday lazyness too and help her relax. #1 and #4 are my favourites.
Thank you! You are right about the laying poses we should've tried those. I'll keep that in mind when I do my next shoot with the same theme And the coffee cup as well!
mb126 wrote:
Agree that a cup of tea might help these a LOT. I like #4, #3 looks extremely awkward to me. I like the idea of #2 but dislike the way her right hand is placed. If she was pushing her hair back behind her ear I think it might go better.
Interesting concept and I think these are very close. The wardrobe and lack of make up is perfect. Also very nice use of natural light.
Thanks for the comment! #3 is not so natural pose compared to the others but I still like it. The hair and her expression look very good to me. It's also nice to hear that styling works as I was responsible for that
BokehBeauty wrote:
I like #5 best. It's great that you kept the beautiful girl without (man-visible) make-up in smooth natural lighting.
Thank you!
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