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Archive 2015 · Red Dahlia - Edited

  
 
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Red Dahlia - Edited


I am having lots of fun playing with these shots.

C& C always welcomed.

Birdie






Edited on Nov 03, 2015 at 06:40 PM · View previous versions



Nov 02, 2015 at 10:28 PM
Rags Hef
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Red Dahlia - Edited


Nice... but...

Inclusion of the stem (a good touch) pushes the center of gravity of the shot too far left

Perhaps shorten the front of stem?

A subject well treated

Rags



Nov 03, 2015 at 10:43 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Red Dahlia - Edited


Thank you Rags for the suggestion. I have changed the crop on one and changed the position of the stem on another . I think I like this way better. Thanks for the suggestion.


Birdie









Different version




Nov 03, 2015 at 06:03 PM
Rags Hef
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Red Dahlia - Edited


I think it looks better too

Rags



Nov 04, 2015 at 06:57 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Red Dahlia - Edited


Wow. Beautiful job Birdie with the last especially.
The color is dynamite.

..Lee



Nov 04, 2015 at 08:33 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Red Dahlia - Edited


Yes - wonderful treatment and luscious color indeed!

I'd like to see it without the leaf in #1maybe? To me it competes with the bird - and then it would balance



Nov 11, 2015 at 12:13 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Red Dahlia - Edited


Beautiful job! I like the "Different Version" best.


Nov 11, 2015 at 04:43 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Red Dahlia - Edited


Thanks so much everyone for the comments. Will play with removing the leaf , thanks for the suggestion carlan9.

Birdie



Nov 13, 2015 at 10:05 PM





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