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Eric Mastilak
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


A few from this weekend from some critique.

















Sep 27, 2015 at 10:48 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


#3 is a winner, Eric. Great shot.


Sep 27, 2015 at 11:04 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


Three is great. Gotta love it when the action affords you distant backgrounds.

Tiny nit: do you have any more space at the top of the frame, E just to give the girl on the right a tad bit of space just above her head?



Sep 27, 2015 at 11:25 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


Without question #3 is it, Eric.
Well done!

Matt



Sep 28, 2015 at 08:05 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


Yep, make more images like 3 and you will be right where you need to be.



Sep 28, 2015 at 08:16 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


3 yes but 1 is pretty good too.


Sep 30, 2015 at 07:48 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


Yup, like the battle in #1 as well as #3.

Chris



Oct 01, 2015 at 07:44 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · U12 Soccer from this weekend


I like all three and even #2 which is not getting much love. Your sense of framing is very good. In #1 and #2 you leave just enough room around the players and manage to blur all distractions. I like the colors in #2 with the strong reds and the pale greens. Her expression is, perhaps, unfortunate but heading can do that to people. The very slight cropping of the player's head in #3 does not bother me and probably would not be noticed by any parent or player. Anyway, all of the energy in the pic is pointing down to the ball. The player on the left in #1 is a little soft. It could be slightly missed focus or maybe stopping down with two players across the frame might have helped. Keep it up!


Oct 01, 2015 at 07:40 PM





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