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lighthound wrote:
Being that your message is about the dew I think you did a nice job on your composition and choice of DOF for your focal stack. I might have pushed the focus back just a little further beyond the center of the flower. Colors and tonality look correct to me as well.
If the message were to be more about the flower with dew on it then you would want to carry your focal all the way from the front to the rear most portion of the flower.
Keep in mind that this is just my personal thoughts. There will be others that would like to see everything in perfect focus. But to me this is an image about the dew not the flower.
Dave...Show more →
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ben egbert wrote:
I agree, it does not all need to be in focus, but I want the leading edges of the petals in focus and start to soften as you get past the major ew drops.
Hi Dave and Ben,
Thank you for critique. I agree, with having more in focus. I want to repeat this photograph and want to know what mistakes to avoid the next time I do it. This was shot at f/8, and a stack of 3 images (if I remember correct).
Do you think it would be better if I went to f/5.6, included more shots (may be 10 images) where each portion is in focus?
Ben,
Now that I look at it, I agree about the leading edge of the petal to be in focus.
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