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And critique or recommendations on these would be appreciated.
















Edited on Sep 22, 2015 at 10:08 PM · View previous versions



Sep 22, 2015 at 06:36 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Tokyo Black and White


The second shot through the glass prevents any face to be sharp. The first and last are fine but the last is most effective.


Sep 22, 2015 at 07:07 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Tokyo Black and White


I'd like to see #1 straightened.


Sep 22, 2015 at 09:45 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Tokyo Black and White


Thanks for the feedback everyone. Updated #1. As for the second not being sharp through the glass, that's what I like about the photo. Maybe it doesn't work though.



Sep 22, 2015 at 10:09 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Tokyo Black and White


rioni wrote:
Thanks for the feedback everyone. Updated #1. As for the second not being sharp through the glass, that's what I like about the photo. Maybe it doesn't work though.


I like it. If you like it, that's really what matters.



Sep 22, 2015 at 10:29 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Tokyo Black and White


Personally I really like these shots - well seen and captured.

I'm totally fine with the faces being diffused by the glass - that is what one would expect when looking through a window that is anything but spotless. I also dig the framing.

Cheers,

Jeff



Sep 23, 2015 at 07:19 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Tokyo Black and White


What message are you trying to convey with these comps? Of the many potential candid captures, why these?
Without that info, the third engages me the most. Eye contact, expressive face. Why did he chose a mask and others didn't? Tilt of the umbrella adds to sense of motion, dynamism.
Scott



Sep 23, 2015 at 09:50 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Tokyo Black and White


sbeme wrote:
What message are you trying to convey with these comps? Of the many potential candid captures, why these?
Without that info, the third engages me the most. Eye contact, expressive face. Why did he chose a mask and others didn't? Tilt of the umbrella adds to sense of motion, dynamism.
Scott


Cause he's sick or has cold.

+1 at most engagement with the third.

Jeff



Sep 23, 2015 at 11:01 AM





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