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AuntiPode
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p.2 #1 · p.2 #1 · WA - Fire


I like the context of the original, but perhaps some clockwise rotation to shoot the flames a little "up" would be a stronger version.


Sep 01, 2015 at 03:05 PM
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p.2 #2 · p.2 #2 · WA - Fire


canless version looks much better, Jeff!



Sep 01, 2015 at 03:25 PM
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p.2 #3 · p.2 #3 · WA - Fire


AuntiPode wrote:
I like the context of the original, but perhaps some clockwise rotation to shoot the flames a little "up" would be a stronger version.


I took a number that were angled upwards, but the patterns just didn't seem to play out right. Probably some user-error, but that's been known to happen with me.

Thanks Karen!

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rongwam wrote:
canless version looks much better, Jeff!


Thank you for the feedback, Henry!

Jeff



Sep 01, 2015 at 03:51 PM
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p.2 #4 · p.2 #4 · WA - Fire


Rework.

Enough light on the face or too dim?

Thanks!

Jeff







Sep 01, 2015 at 04:13 PM
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p.2 #5 · p.2 #5 · WA - Fire


Never hesitate to cheat. Rotating in post is a fine solution.







Sep 01, 2015 at 04:41 PM
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p.2 #6 · p.2 #6 · WA - Fire


Getting "burnt out" on this one.

Think this is the final edit.









Sep 01, 2015 at 05:01 PM
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p.2 #7 · p.2 #7 · WA - Fire


The face seems off to me. The lightning isn't quite there yet, and it looks like it's gently blowing out a candle instead of breathing fire.


Sep 01, 2015 at 05:17 PM
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p.2 #8 · p.2 #8 · WA - Fire


georgetd wrote:
The face seems off to me. The lightning isn't quite there yet, and it looks like it's gently blowing out a candle instead of breathing fire.


I feel the same way, but I can't edit the submission at the moment. I sent Fred a PM, so hopefully he can help out.

I'm just gonna post the canless version - the face just wasn't working. :\

Thanks for the feedback!









Sep 01, 2015 at 05:37 PM
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p.2 #9 · p.2 #9 · WA - Fire


beavens wrote:
- the face just wasn't working. :\




I bet you hear that from your wife all the time.


As I already mention over there, I really like your final version Jeff. Very nice work!

It's going to be a fun run this week! I Love Karen's entry a lot!

Dave




Sep 01, 2015 at 07:37 PM
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p.2 #10 · p.2 #10 · WA - Fire


lighthound wrote:
I bet you hear that from your wife all the time.

As I already mention over there, I really like your final version Jeff. Very nice work!

It's going to be a fun run this week! I Love Karen's entry a lot!

Dave



- thanks buddy.

Lots of good ones again this week.

Jeff



Sep 01, 2015 at 07:45 PM
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p.2 #11 · p.2 #11 · WA - Fire


Thanks, Dave!




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