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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Hailey


Some shots from last night.
Out shooting with the 85mm at f/1.4 in some gorgeous cloudy dusk - weather.
My beautiful model, surely makes this too easy.

















Aug 25, 2015 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Hailey


What sparkling eyes and a beautiful model. Fantastic photo, especially #3


Aug 25, 2015 at 01:22 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Hailey


Nice captures Matt !


Aug 25, 2015 at 02:36 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Hailey


These are beautiful shot. Nice use of shallow DOF. #2 is my favorite.

Kind of hard to mess up a head shot of such a beautiful young lady.



Aug 25, 2015 at 03:53 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Hailey


I don't know what you're doing in post, but I'm not a fan.

It looks like you're generating some kind of pseudo-grain effect, especially evident in image 3.

Beautiful model, the lighting is very flat and unappealing. Nice bokeh on the 1.4 !

Thanks for sharing your work.




Aug 26, 2015 at 09:13 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Hailey


I really like #1. I think #2 should have been photographed from a higher angle or she should have lowered her chin a little.

#3, the B&W, is shot so close that the shallow DOF @1.4 becomes a detriment.



Aug 26, 2015 at 12:28 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Hailey


I love #1 and #2.

#3 is great, but I think it is not my taste. She doesn't look quite real. Almost a doll or manikin. Or maybe it is the large horizontal catch lights? Sorry I can't put my finger on it.

Thanks for sharing.

Dave



Aug 26, 2015 at 09:41 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Hailey


The right pretty model always makes my work look much better than it is!


Aug 27, 2015 at 12:04 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Hailey


I agree about the processing. Looks like very low clarity was applied globally, then repainted back onto the eyes alone. Kind of creepy, in my opinion.

I think you should have tried to get her to lower her chin a bit and do a little bit of turtling to tighten up the jaw line. It looks very soft with her upturned head.



Aug 29, 2015 at 12:56 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Hailey


Beautiful woman, but the post processing is very bad. My definition of bad is this - If you can tell there was post processing, it is too much. Viewers should never know whether a portrait was photoshopped or not.


Aug 29, 2015 at 01:26 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Hailey


I agree with others, not a fan of the processing. However! You have some fantastic work on your website!!



Aug 29, 2015 at 08:58 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Hailey


film_4ever wrote:
I don't know what you're doing in post, but I'm not a fan.

It looks like you're generating some kind of pseudo-grain effect, especially evident in image 3.

Beautiful model, the lighting is very flat and unappealing. Nice bokeh on the 1.4 !

Thanks for sharing your work.



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dmacmillan wrote:
I really like #1. I think #2 should have been photographed from a higher angle or she should have lowered her chin a little.

#3, the B&W, is shot so close that the shallow DOF @1.4 becomes a detriment.


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ucphotog wrote:
I love #1 and #2.

#3 is great, but I think it is not my taste. She doesn't look quite real. Almost a doll or manikin. Or maybe it is the large horizontal catch lights? Sorry I can't put my finger on it.

Thanks for sharing.

Dave


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Dave McGaughey wrote:
I agree about the processing. Looks like very low clarity was applied globally, then repainted back onto the eyes alone. Kind of creepy, in my opinion.

I think you should have tried to get her to lower her chin a bit and do a little bit of turtling to tighten up the jaw line. It looks very soft with her upturned head.


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elliotkramer wrote:
Beautiful woman, but the post processing is very bad. My definition of bad is this - If you can tell there was post processing, it is too much. Viewers should never know whether a portrait was photoshopped or not.


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a123 wrote:
I agree with others, not a fan of the processing. However! You have some fantastic work on your website!!


Thanks for your critiques everyone !



Aug 31, 2015 at 09:39 AM





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