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1. unfortunate that you cut off her hands and feet! Face a bit bright.
2. to be a tad brutal, too much room above her head and the bright area distracts. Dodge or square crop? The top of her head looks too bright.
3. again the little rapids steal the show. I think I'd crop off the top 1/4
4. see, in this image, the water is darker; good. But ya cut off his fingers. I'd be tempted to crop to portrait orientation, at his sleeves.
5. snapshot-ish. Maimed again. Nice dof, and you have their complete attention. Lighting and processing are so much better in the other images.
6. the winnah! Now that is one cool card. I'm not sure about the smoke. Behind him, I understand, but in front, I don't.
It's obvious that your beautiful children trust and love you. Good work, keep shooting.
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