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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Summer on 2nd Avenue


Experimenting again with "guillotined heads." Any PP suggestions and critiques appreciated.



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Aug 13, 2015 at 09:10 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Summer on 2nd Avenue


Crop down a little farther, to make it a bit more intentional. maybe also crop in from the left, to remove those non-subject legs from the picture?


Aug 14, 2015 at 02:03 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Summer on 2nd Avenue


I'm with George - right left are detracting.

If you square things up, you still get the nice diagonal dissecting the image.

Also might want to reduce those highlights a bit.

Cheers!

Jeff







Aug 14, 2015 at 07:21 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Summer on 2nd Avenue


Hi George and Jeff:

Thanks for the crop suggestions and rework! I had reduced the highlights on the legs from what you see using a curves adjustment, but it only worked to a certain point without creating artifacts. Not sure if more can be done, given my basic photoshop knowledge, or maybe the detail is mostly gone.



Aug 14, 2015 at 07:52 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Summer on 2nd Avenue


Reduced highlights. B&W or color?



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Aug 15, 2015 at 03:44 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Summer on 2nd Avenue


I don't get the story here....sexy? ...some sort of human interest? .....shapes, spaces, composition? I am lost and don't see the intent or the direction to take with this. It just seems to be a random shot.


Aug 16, 2015 at 12:11 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Summer on 2nd Avenue


Camperjim wrote:
I don't get the story here....sexy? ...some sort of human interest? .....shapes, spaces, composition? I am lost and don't see the intent or the direction to take with this. It just seems to be a random shot.


Thanks for looking Jim. Not a sight you see very often in "concrete city." There's something primal about kicking off your shoes and exposing your feet and toes to the air, then lounging and relaxing with a cup of coffee, in concrete city. Second Ave. and 4th Street is not your normal backyard. Perhaps the original crop makes this point stronger, showing the juxtaposition of the woman who is wearing shoes.



Aug 16, 2015 at 11:14 AM





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