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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Summer bridals


It's been a loooong time since my last post. However, now that I am moving my business towards shooting only weddings and I want to get better, I thought this would be a good place to grow. Here are a few from my latest, this is just bride and groom. C&C welcome...rude remarks not so much

ps. I struggle with w/b especially in such a green environment, any comments/help is appreciated.








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Aug 13, 2015 at 07:23 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Summer bridals


The first pose doesn't do much for me. It's very masculine. Love the dress and open back. I would have had her shift her weight to give her more curve and appear less masculine. It also accentuates her nose. Turn the flowers around. No one likes to see stems. Also...lift her arm off her body. It make it look like she's got more under-arm fat than she really does

Shift her weight again in 2 and 3.

Would liked to have seen more of his face in general but especially in 3.

3/5 pics have their foreheads together.

His hands are awkward in #5. You need to have them interact more and shoot through the moment. Would have been nicer after he grabbed her or did something with his hands.

Again...she's very masculine in #5. Check out some of stuff on hand posing. Her wrists should be rotated out and broken up.

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Aug 14, 2015 at 12:07 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Summer bridals


my favorite is this last shot in this set


Aug 14, 2015 at 06:35 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Summer bridals


Thank you @rondphoto. That is all very helpful!




Aug 14, 2015 at 12:03 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Summer bridals


Ron nailed it on posing comments for sure. #5 could be stronger with a shallower DOF. I keep getting distracted by that painted cinder block wall in the background. I feel like the posing notes that were already given are especially important in the conditions you were shooting in as the light is very flat and not doing any favors for showing shape.


Aug 14, 2015 at 12:54 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Summer bridals


^ indeed.

#5 would have been killer if you opened up to 1.4 or even f2...but you were at f3.2 and a fair bit back. A tighter shot with just her face in focus would have made all the difference in the world



Aug 14, 2015 at 03:19 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Summer bridals


love the last shot!


Aug 16, 2015 at 04:02 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Summer bridals


I would have showed the whole tattoo or photoshoped it out. A tad distracting. Great job tho!


Aug 19, 2015 at 09:10 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Summer bridals


Veedotcom wrote:
I would have showed the whole tattoo or photoshoped it out. A tad distracting. Great job tho!


I would never photoshop something off a clients body! Leave it!



Aug 26, 2015 at 04:01 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Summer bridals


Up to client!


Aug 31, 2015 at 10:23 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Summer bridals


cool... i love the hidden tatoo on back


Sep 07, 2015 at 06:11 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Summer bridals


I like the fourth. All is very harmonious - the mood, perspective, light and color


Sep 17, 2015 at 02:55 PM





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