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My gut response was similar to Jeff's regarding an expectation to seeing a draft.
However ... as a portfolio piece, I think this does a nice job of showing your ability to handle both glass reflections and black on black ... two very challenging aspects.
As to the image, I might like to see just a bit more of the bottle cap and bottom of the bottle to present a touch of dimensionality and separation of the vertical black abyss. OTOH, the lack of their detail makes for a kind of sultry vibe with the curvy highlight being the contour to stand out as it does. Likely, as a portfolio piece, I think this one shows off some technical capability as well as some artistic rendering in your lighting choices.
Despite the difference from a draft expectation, recall that not everyone who is viewing your port is going to be looking for the traditional expectation. I think this is a fine piece for inclusion in your port.
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