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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · A stroll in a winery


Still using my trusty 5D classic.

5D and 85mm f/1.8

Advice for improvements?






The leaf on the left is really bothering me, but too hard to process out.




Aug 06, 2015 at 10:01 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · A stroll in a winery


I like this photography...and it is the kind I go for. It's only 2 images, but overall good work. I would recommend experimenting with shallower DOF also; it's fun. And perhaps having the subject occupy more of the frame.


Aug 10, 2015 at 03:14 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · A stroll in a winery


I agree on moving the subject closer. The dress height is distracting in the first shot....and the angle of the shot makes that worse. The second would be better with the subject further away or closer. It would be better not to have her in the middle. You want to lead the eyes to where she walked or is walking. In the middle deemphasizes the length of the groves.


Aug 17, 2015 at 04:53 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · A stroll in a winery


Eye contact with you....The above are fine comments on a very good subject. Have her smile!
A work in progress!! You have all the elements here....
Dan



Aug 17, 2015 at 04:54 PM





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