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Beautiful model. Great B & W conversion.
Not thrilled about the beach location you chose. I've mentioned this in some of your previous images. IMHO, you seem to not pay close attention to some of background clutter in your images.
For example in this image, the stick on the RHS of the image, whatever the dark spot is on the LHS. What is that big pile of "elephant poop" looking stuff above her head??
I'm sorry but just because she's a gorgeous model, with attractive lighting, doesn't mean you don't need to pay attention to the smaller details of the image. I would recommend trying to clean some of these items up in post since the image has already been taken.
Thanks for posting your work. I always enjoy seeing your images. (Just because I provide criticism to your work doesn't mean I think it is a poor image.)
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