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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · from the weekend


From this weekend. CC is welcome as always.

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Jul 09, 2015 at 11:42 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · from the weekend


Hi Danny,

I like your concept and location choice, giving natural leading lines and a vanishing point. The slightly-washed out processing contributes to the mood I believe you were attempting to establish.

A few nit-picks:

The blur in the front is oddly distracting, at least for me. I don't know if it's from your DOF / aperture selection or you applied a blur in post-processing, but if I had to guess I'd say it's a post-processing job. IF that's the case, I would suggest easing up just a bit, but that's simply my preference.

The strong light background on the upper right of the image competes for the viewer's attention, and it interrupts the leading lines that are trying to make this a powerful image. A slightly different composition (rotated counterclockwise when viewed from the top, for example) would totally change the focus in a good way, I believe.

Finally, I don't know if this was on purpose or not, but your subject's hair is getting a bit "moody" too. I would suggest smoothing at least some of those fly-away hairs out, but once again that's my personal preference.



Jul 10, 2015 at 07:04 PM





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