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Trying out a new lens on the beach this weekend, the Olympus MZuiko 75MM F1.8. Trying to decide between color and black and white. Critiques and PP suggestions appreciated.



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Jul 09, 2015 at 09:26 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Anthropomorphic Tree


Or maybe a slightly different approach. Your thoughts are appreciated.



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Jul 09, 2015 at 09:55 PM
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I prefer the first, tighter shot. A pretty neutral scene with some nice tones, so the BW is the winner for me.

I'd tone down the highlights in the front of the tree and bring up the shadows a slight bit going towards the end.

Might consider letting out a little room to the left for the end to flow out into, but more frame-filling crop you've got could already be the best.

If you were to reshoot I think I'd like this a lower-level and more 'in my face', ya know?

Cheers!

Jeff



Jul 10, 2015 at 07:07 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Anthropomorphic Tree


Hi Jeff: Suggestions much apreciated.


Jul 10, 2015 at 08:00 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Anthropomorphic Tree


I am with Jeff on his feedback, advice, except that I like the hints of color in this almost monochromatic capture.
Scott



Jul 10, 2015 at 08:39 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Anthropomorphic Tree


The first two images are the best and #2 would be my choice of those.

+1 @ Jeff's suggestions


Dave



Jul 10, 2015 at 10:28 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Anthropomorphic Tree


Thanks guys for your observations and suggestions.


Jul 10, 2015 at 01:38 PM





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