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Welcome to FM, Critique!
this is a very interesting series and I am glad you shared a number of images.
All have interesting patterns, play of dark and light, sun and shadow, range of textures making them quite engaging. I think the challenge is what to include/exclude and how to keep the eye moving along a dominant flow before detouring to other areas of interest. Your fifth image stands out in this way to me.
For the first, I would go more pano, cropping from the bottom to the bottom of the arching sand. Foreground sand doesn't add much, IMO.
In the third, consider a square crop, cutting from the bottom to where the dark shadow edges the sand on the right edge.
In the fourth, a sliver off from the left?
Scott
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