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Archive 2015 · Cool Tattooed Mom

  
 
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Times Square, 42nd Street, tonight on my way home, doing some street photography. Elbow to elbow with tourists who don't seem to notice or mind my capturing them. Critiques and pp suggestions appreciated.



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Jul 01, 2015 at 09:05 PM
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First reaction is that I would like the boy to be featured more strongly in the scene.

Can't comment on color, as my work monitor is all kinda sideways.

Street is something I have nearly zero experience with, so I'm not much help!

Jeff



Jul 02, 2015 at 06:41 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Cool Tattooed Mom


Hi Jeff: Good point, and I agree. My eye goes first to the red plaid shirt, then the french fries (my favorite food), and then the boy. I fell in love with his Yankee cap, tattoo shirt, and toy in his hand.


Jul 02, 2015 at 09:13 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Cool Tattooed Mom


Yes, the title prepared me for a tattooed mom, but the plaid shirt was most prominent, then I looked at five people and found the shirt. I don't know anything about street so its just my reaction.


Jul 02, 2015 at 09:19 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Cool Tattooed Mom


Hi Ben: That red plaid shirt is pretty powerful.
Maybe will try this in black and white.



Jul 02, 2015 at 09:27 AM





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