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Some appealing elements, but too many misses to work as a whole, as you know. Hard to be sure with the jpeg artifacts. but the pan speed might be a little off. Ironically, it's much harder to make a slow pan work than a fast pan. The bowsprit cutoff was a fairly big miss, as you mentioned, but I'd suggest it would probably look better with less boat reflection in the water and more mast. That would also move the centered lines of people detail lower in the frame for a better composition. Also, the white boat in the background was unfortunate.
If you look at the boat color in the OOC image, notice that the color varies along the length of the boat. You can't win going for a "white" boat without a significant selection effort to apply different corrections to different parts of the image.
(Note, the recreation bits are just to illustrate composition suggestion rather than as a solution for being cropped in the original.)
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