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One of the problems with your image I see is that there is no anchor point so my eyes keep wandering w/o resting. Too many horses scattered all over the image.
The composition, with the first horizon line positioned almost mid-frame, looks very static. You need to decide which one, the land or the sky, you want to be prominent. In other words you need to emphasize one element of your image in order to maintain its dominance in the composition. An all-inclusive attitude most of the times cause a visual confusion on the viewer.
Another aspect that, IMO, needs to be emphasized are the colors. They look a bit dull on my monitor, which together with the low contrast makes the image... well... dull.
So here are my suggestions.
Move the horizon line up or down according to what you like to be more prominent
Enhance the contrast and make the color more vivid.
I also believe you need to play a bit with the WB.
Hope this helps.
Socrate
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