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Some great shots. I don't know much about putting together editorial ports, but it seems like too random of a mix to me. Some seem more travel and some seem more commercial but it seems like the target for both would be different, would a magazine editor want to see both? If that is really so, I think it would be stronger to separate the sections. Seems there is at least a travel section, commercial, and journalistic theme to them that would be stronger in more distinct sections. Also I would toss 15 -1 (just some kids off to school? Seems like it is there to show some sort of international travel vibe, but this could be a school in San Francisco or some other local street, not sure what your reasoning for inclusion is) and 27 -2 (the people are clumped and busy at the register and they detract rather than add, if there was just one bartender working in good light, maybe, but the way they are lumped up and just hunched over the machine, so not clean enough of a composition to have as a worthy inclusion IMHO). Also for a professional spread I don't know if I'd lead with the first one, since his face is pretty soft from the motion blur, but not necessarily in a purposeful enough way and makes it seem too snapshot-ish.
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