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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Steampunk Couple


and in BW!

Scott



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May 14, 2015 at 06:58 PM
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Scott,

There's a lot to like about this, but also two issues that keep me from loving it:

1. The woman in the lower right - lose her.
2. Cropping of the woman's arms - super awkward!

Otherwise, I am really liking it and the series is great.

Cheers,

Jeff



May 14, 2015 at 07:07 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Steampunk Couple


Interesting ... and a good lesson why anyone with a mustache shouldn't go bobbing for apples in a paraffin vat.


May 14, 2015 at 09:19 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Steampunk Couple


beavens wrote:
Scott,

There's a lot to like about this, but also two issues that keep me from loving it:

1. The woman in the lower right - lose her.
2. Cropping of the woman's arms - super awkward!

Otherwise, I am really liking it and the series is great.

Cheers,

Jeff


thanks Jeff.
I agree about the arms.
I have a funny reaction to the woman lower right. Typically, I would view this as pure distraction. But then there is the reality of shooting at a fair. But, I actually find it a plus in this image, quietly echoing the parasol the woman is holding, repeating the theme. Maybe it's just me...


Scott



May 16, 2015 at 06:47 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Steampunk Couple


AuntiPode wrote:
Interesting ... and a good lesson why anyone with a mustache shouldn't go bobbing for apples in a paraffin vat.





Scott



May 16, 2015 at 06:47 PM
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I like this one. Maybe a bit more background blur?







May 16, 2015 at 08:24 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Steampunk Couple


I do enjoy the extra space Karen's rework provides.

While I get the repetition that the corner woman provides I still feel that she detracts from the couple. Don't mess with a good thing, Scotty!

Jeff



May 16, 2015 at 09:15 PM





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