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May 09, 2015 at 04:09 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · LL Sportraits?

Looks good. Only ones I would say no on would be 2,4,7. Simple solution on #6...

May 09, 2015 at 07:46 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · LL Sportraits?

Good quick, easy fix Paul..
Also to my eye #3 colors seem off compared to the rest?

May 09, 2015 at 08:35 PM

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · LL Sportraits?

very nice natural sportraits.

May 12, 2015 at 09:09 AM

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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · LL Sportraits?

Paul - when I saw your crop, I had one of those, "Oh, duh!" facepalm moments. Thanks for the idea on that.

Corey - agreed, I went back and fixed it.

fstop - thanks!

May 13, 2015 at 07:16 PM

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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · LL Sportraits?

I like these, good job.

Bill

May 14, 2015 at 08:47 AM

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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · LL Sportraits?

These are nice. Not a big fan of the cut out body parts in 2, 8 and 10 though. You seem to be going for very tight framing, which might be generally fine given that you are mostly doing head and shoulder portrait style shots. However in some cases such as number 2, you need a bit more space to show the context.

May 14, 2015 at 09:00 AM

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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · LL Sportraits?

Thanks Bill. Curious - I definitely agree on #2, and #10 probably would have benefited from me taking a step to my right, but I actually don't find it as much a problem in 8 - I think it's enough there for the viewer's mind to fill in the gestalt, and it's not as minor a cut as in 10 where it just feels like (and was) a compositional faux pas. That said, I was definitely more conscious of composing with a bit more context/bit less amputations this evening, given your feedback.

May 14, 2015 at 08:31 PM


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