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Anuta, Solomon Islands



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May 03, 2015 at 05:34 PM
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Try cropping that lighter area above her head and in the background out. I tried it and it made the image much more powerful. Nice capture, BTW !!!


May 04, 2015 at 09:23 AM
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RDStamps wrote:
Try cropping that lighter area above her head and in the background out. I tried it and it made the image much more powerful. Nice capture, BTW !!!


I agree and will do. Sincere thanks for looking and commenting.

Paul




May 04, 2015 at 09:44 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Woman With Pipe


That's a powerful image which I much enjoy.

But the brightness of the pipe element takes away from the overall strength, for me, which I feel should be the face of the woman.

Thanks for sharing.

- Phil



May 04, 2015 at 03:46 PM
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philkvt wrote:
That's a powerful image which I much enjoy.

But the brightness of the pipe element takes away from the overall strength, for me, which I feel should be the face of the woman.

Thanks for sharing.

- Phil


Excellent and valid point, Phil. Thanks for taking the time to review and comment - very much appreciated.

Paul





May 04, 2015 at 04:58 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Woman With Pipe


This may be my first post here, I haven't looked, and I can't find anything about c/c on the non-critique forum so please excuse me if I say anything out of bounds.

I agree with the comments on crop and pipe but I do think the face of the subject is too low in micro-contrast. It is rather bland and could be much more interesting with a bit of an edit.



May 04, 2015 at 05:09 PM
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the_traveler wrote:
This may be my first post here, I haven't looked, and I can't find anything about c/c on the non-critique forum so please excuse me if I say anything out of bounds.

I agree with the comments on crop and pipe but I do think the face of the subject is too low in micro-contrast. It is rather bland and could be much more interesting with a bit of an edit.


Thanks. You have said nothing that would be considered out of bounds on this forum.
Rather, your constructive feedback is always welcomed and sincerely appreciated.

I hope you will continue to participate,

Paul




May 04, 2015 at 08:00 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Woman With Pipe


interesting, I haven't seen many women pipe smokers lately




May 05, 2015 at 06:07 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Woman With Pipe


This is really one very good bw portrait.
But I think I would like to get some eye contact.



May 08, 2015 at 01:38 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Woman With Pipe


probishaw wrote:
Rework per your suggestion. Agree that it works much better.

Thanks,

Paul











May 08, 2015 at 05:52 PM





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