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JimFox wrote:
Hey Dan,
#1 has a magenta cast, I don't like that for a B&W. #2 looks better as a B&W but is lacking in contrast and the granite walls are almost blown out.
In both #1 and 2 that stump is just way to centered. The stump is cool, but still think thirds as you compose. That stump should be to the left of Yosemite Falls in #1, and that composition would have rocked. In #2 with that vertical comp, not sure which way you could have gone with the stump, but lined up with the falls is a definite no go here.
Now #3, that is a very sweet shot, the look of the B&W is perfect! And yes, this is a shot I could see Ansel taking.
So.... do you have #1 with the stump off center a lot more, and can you get the deep blacks and cool contrast of #3 in it with no magenta?
Anyway, those are my thoughts.
Jim...Show more →
Well, Jim always a help.
I made the mistake saving in color space form scanner. Easy fix for #1.
Unfortunately no other perspective to offer for it & number 2 has the same problem. Well I got 1 for 3.
Thanks
Dan
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