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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


Would like to make sure you think posting this since he is skins would be fine. I assume so since he is a boy.
Topic is games. I thought it fit.

How do my levels, and everything else look, ok?

C&C please.





© roger lund 2015

MF Pentacon 135/2.8






MF Pentacon 135/2.8



Edited on Apr 27, 2015 at 12:31 PM · View previous versions



Apr 27, 2015 at 11:13 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


Roger,

Subject matter is totally fine - no worries there.

I might want to being the highlights down just a bit, especially on the chest. Also might want to boost the shadows around the face/eyes.

Do you have any room to recrop? Seeing that the boy is sizing up a target my brain naturally wants to have some negative space to the left where he is looking.

I did a super quick and sloppy recrop below.

Cheers!

Jeff







Apr 27, 2015 at 11:51 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


beavens wrote:
Roger,

Subject matter is totally fine - no worries there.

I might want to being the highlights down just a bit, especially on the chest. Also might want to boost the shadows around the face/eyes.

Do you have any room to recrop? Seeing that the boy is sizing up a target my brain naturally wants to have some negative space to the left where he is looking.

I did a super quick and sloppy recrop below.

Cheers!

Jeff


How does that look? and no that was the entire image, as far as crop goes I did crop in some.




Apr 27, 2015 at 12:32 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


roger lund wrote:
How does that look? and no that was the entire image, as far as crop goes I did crop in some.



Definitely better with the highlights and shadows!

I bet Karen (Auntipode) could whip up some more space with her cloning skills.

Jeff



Apr 27, 2015 at 12:48 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


Yep, I like the edit better and agree that a little more space to the left would help.


Apr 27, 2015 at 01:10 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


hah, well i'm not very good at that.





© roger lund 2015

Tried.




Apr 27, 2015 at 04:23 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


I decided not to submit it , as I felt it was not up to par. I'll focus on another for this week.


Apr 29, 2015 at 08:12 AM
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roger lund wrote:
I decided not to submit it , as I felt it was not up to par. I'll focus on another for this week.


For what it's worth I think your rework is a definite improvement!

Jeff



Apr 29, 2015 at 08:20 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


Heck Roger! You should have at least entered it. I think it was definitely worthy and it doesn't cost anything!

I will say that this was a tough assignment this week. I finally thought of a cool idea last night and 78 shots later and a wet lens I finally had an image I thought might work for my entry. We'll see.

Edited on Apr 29, 2015 at 09:56 AM · View previous versions



Apr 29, 2015 at 09:31 AM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


lighthound wrote:
Heck Roger! You should have at least entered it. I think it was definitely worthy and it doesn't cost anything!

I will say that this was a tough assignment this week. I finally thought of a cool idea last night and 78 shots later and a wet lens I finally had an image I though might work for my entry. We'll see.


Yes, the subject was very vast.




Apr 29, 2015 at 09:33 AM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


Maybe like this......








Apr 29, 2015 at 11:19 AM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · WA655 - Skins vs Shirts Bean Bag Toss


Something looks "odd" to me.

The amount of contrast between key / shadow on his body looks different than the amount of contrast in his eyes / hair ... or something like that. Curious to see sooc.



Apr 29, 2015 at 06:23 PM





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