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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Heaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaavily cropped to get here, hence some softness.

Thoughts?

Jeff







Apr 21, 2015 at 08:18 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Diggin' all the lines, and the leading lines.

Maybe a tad more breathing room top & right. Could use a bit of "skew" adjustment to straighten things a touch.



Apr 21, 2015 at 08:40 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Updated!







Apr 21, 2015 at 08:52 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Maybe, split the diff ... lining up with the gutter on the right, and the window sash on the top. I wasn't expecting the tonal values on the right to be so bright.


Apr 21, 2015 at 08:57 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


I wasn't sure if the lack of facial detail would detract a lot from the picture, so I decided that I would try for some lemonade.

Definitely will take some tweaking, but I really like how this could turn out.








Apr 21, 2015 at 08:58 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Nope. Your edit didn't help. She's still looking at you like you are some kind of perv or something.

All joking aside, I agree with Kent on the cool lines you have here. And your edit does read much better to my eyes. I can see why you cropped the original the way you did but I think the down spout is the lesser of the to evils here and it did need more room on that side and top like you have in your edit.



Apr 21, 2015 at 09:04 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


OK... Now THAT is friggin cool Jeff! I like that effect big time on this image.


Apr 21, 2015 at 09:06 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Second version for me.


Apr 21, 2015 at 09:12 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Thanks for the feedback, everyone! Definitely helping out.

Jeff



Apr 21, 2015 at 09:24 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


I like the 2nd version....Very artsy.


Apr 22, 2015 at 12:52 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


mxwizard1 wrote:
I like the 2nd version....Very artsy.


Cheers mx!



Apr 22, 2015 at 12:53 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


Good find
Great lines
Nice conversion.
2nd version for me.
Scott



Apr 22, 2015 at 08:54 PM
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p.1 #13 · p.1 #13 · Girl at the Top of the Stairs


sbeme wrote:
Good find
Great lines
Nice conversion.
2nd version for me.
Scott


Thanks Scott!



Apr 23, 2015 at 07:22 AM





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