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lighthound wrote:
I like it! I was going to suggest a knife and fork on each side but I think that might become psychotic and sick.
Have you looked at a really tight crop on this? I wonder if it would put more emphasis on the creepy corpse.
Thanks Dave! I looked at a tighter crop but it just didn't "feel" right overall, if that makes sense.
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AuntiPode wrote:
Exactly. Being somewhere that a fiend might be....
Good point - if there was anywhere for a fiend to be it would be one of these places.
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Squirrely Eyed wrote:
Now that is spectacular. Did you pose the bird or is it as discovered?
I would be inclined to crop in a little tighter, to remove the shadow from frame-right and what's below the sill at the bottom.
This would also work really well if you added a raven's egg, eyes of a crocodile, and testicles of a newt. Maybe even a cauldron.
While I'm all about birds, I definitely didn't touch or pose this guy - that's kinda nasty!
I really like the bottom sill for balancing and framing. I feel the right-hand side is necessary because otherwise the comp would be too centered and that doesn't work with the subject's pose IMO.
Ahaha no witch's brew for me, thanks!
But seriously, thanks for the feedback everyone.
Jeff
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