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My gut reaction is that it doesn't work at all. I feel like it needs to be shot from higher and closer, looking down at a 45 to 90-degree angle on the older couple, with separation from the bride and groom. This would also remove the light sources, part of the white panels, and the spectators. That said, my secondary gut reaction is that this is the sort of image that would be found with a National Geographic article on some sort of subculture--more gritty and less aesthetically pleasing than I like, but just as legitimate of a storytelling photo.
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