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Archive 2015 · Laura-Jane again..

  
 
David-D
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I did this shoot a couple of months ago and I've shared a few images from this shoot already.
Below are a few more from this shoot which I have not shared before.

Make and hair is by : the lovely Vanee from Babydoll Makeup Artistry
Model : Laura-Jane - http://www.laurajanecorker.com/

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Thank you for viewing and all comments are welcome.



Apr 12, 2015 at 08:52 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Laura-Jane again..


Nice images of a lovely model.

#1 - I love the shot overall ... the "blank white" face seems overdone to my eyes .. although it does reveal her lovely face structure.

#2 - I like the idea ... however the visual balance with the horizon seems out of place.

#3 - This is very fine ... no nits for me at all



Apr 12, 2015 at 09:09 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Laura-Jane again..


Love love love #3


Apr 12, 2015 at 11:31 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Laura-Jane again..


1&3 are outstanding. #2 (for my taste) is a little muted (flat), but a great shot regardless


Apr 13, 2015 at 07:10 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Laura-Jane again..


Awesome images.

Beautiful model, great location, nice wardrobe, nice lighting.

Small nit on image 1: I'd consider cranking back on the contrast on the face. Looks a bit too white.

Image 2 might benefit from a crop, to me the background is just not that interesting. Not sure if the current crop at the legs is working for me either.

Image 3 is superb !

TFS!



Apr 13, 2015 at 10:37 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Laura-Jane again..


tonyfield wrote:
Nice images of a lovely model.

#1 - I love the shot overall ... the "blank white" face seems overdone to my eyes .. although it does reveal her lovely face structure.

#2 - I like the idea ... however the visual balance with the horizon seems out of place.

#3 - This is very fine ... no nits for me at all


Thanks Tony for your constructive feedback



May 03, 2015 at 06:31 PM





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