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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Hellooo


Thoughts?

How off-putting are the cropped legs? I was more concerned with the face when I took the picture and neglected to include some buffer room. Oops.

Thanks,

Jeff







Apr 12, 2015 at 10:25 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Hellooo


Yes, I would like the legs, and more room around the foreground horse.


Apr 12, 2015 at 11:48 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Hellooo


a bit humorous with the up close head. and wide angle distortion.
I would prefer a bit more room, legs too. I would crop the sliver of building on the right edge.
Maybe experiment with some sacrifice to go portrait of head, mane and BG horse.
Scott



Apr 12, 2015 at 01:05 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Hellooo


+1 @ Scott foreshortening effect.

Normally, I'm a fan of foreshortening, but this time not so much.

+1 @ sacrifice left body (eradicates foreshortening and retains mass to face) ... going portrait + BG horse & buckets



Apr 12, 2015 at 02:00 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Hellooo


Thanks for the feedback, everyone!

The perspective warp sure is funky, but I agree that the image is stronger without it.

What say you?

Jeff







Apr 12, 2015 at 05:33 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Hellooo


Better.


Apr 12, 2015 at 05:36 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Hellooo


Nice!


Apr 12, 2015 at 06:59 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Hellooo


Nice rework Jeff! I agree with the others, much better as the emphasis is on that head now.


Apr 12, 2015 at 08:01 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Hellooo


+1 @ better.


Apr 12, 2015 at 09:27 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Hellooo


Thanks for the help, everyone.

Jeff



Apr 12, 2015 at 11:21 PM





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