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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · On the murale


Photography class from yesterday



Mado 2015




Apr 09, 2015 at 05:49 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · On the murale


A couple of nits on this one.

- the background is getting a lot of attention because it is so busy. I think a crop to hide a lot of the background would make the girls overpower the background.

- timing of this shot caught them unprepared. One girl is passing something to another and not paying attention to the camera. One expression is a bit off too, but you can't always control that!



Apr 10, 2015 at 09:15 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · On the murale


Hi -
Yes - The background is a little too much - Girls are great - Action by the girls just adds to the shot for me - Not a say cheese look -
Thanks -
Paul



Apr 12, 2015 at 07:07 AM





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