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AuntiPode wrote:
Maybe a bit less vignette? Not sure the position and character of the stick adds much as it is. Perhaps a smaller one or one placed so it was a less intrusive and distracting object that works the composition with a less visual heavy hand?
I think I'll have to post a version that isn't so compressed - unfortunately the vignetting is much more pronounced with the web copy. My bad, should have edited it after I saw it hit the forums.
I didn't manipulate the scene before shooting, just got down and dirty and went to it. Personally I think the stick keeps the eyes pushed in towards the diagonal, but then again I think I put too much weigh on obvious lines.
Do I at least get bonus points for shooting it as-is?
Thanks for the feedback, as always!
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ben egbert wrote:
Something fishy here, looks like it has an overbite.
Sorry could not resist and you already have the best comments before I got here.
Ahaha no worries, Ben - Scott already got things started so now it's pretty much expected.
Cheers,
Jeff
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