Jonathan Brady Offline Upload & Sell: Off
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The light is fantastic, IMO. You MAY have done even slightly better with a white reflector on her. Love the breeze moving her hair, the bright blue eyes, and connection with the camera.
It does appear, mostly in 2 and 3, that her shirt is reflecting off of her face just a tad. Not sure there's anything to be done about it or that it even matters but after scanning the images several times for things which may be improved, that was something I saw.
3 is my favorite. If it were my image and I were processing to my taste, I'd probably do a few minor things in LR. 1) Add add a local adjustment brush and select her face and neck and chest and add about 1/3 of a stop of exposure. 2) I'd add a vignette (maybe around -20). 3) And then I'd go to "camera calibration" on the bottom panel and add about +20-ish to the "Blue Primary" saturation slider.
Overall, these are VERY minor and just some things that I saw trying to look at your image and develop my own eye a little better. I think if left as-is, they're STUNNING and you've really done a great job!!! Can't wait until my little girl (who's 2.5) is willing to sit still for a few seconds to let me fire off a few frames!!
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