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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Help with an image.


Went to the Minnesota Landscape Arboretum yesterday and grabbed some nice shots. I liked this shot but I'm not sure what to do with it. Here is my edit and a link to the RAW (albeit a smaller version thanks to Google).
I would love suggestions, reworks or just feedback.

RAW
http://lh5.googleusercontent.com/-0qLVuciY9_Y/VPx1ADWMgRI/AAAAAAAAGtE/OERqDoSSm3c/w940-h1409-no/BG0Q2052.CR2

Thanks
Greg



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I would love suggestions for a title as well.




Mar 08, 2015 at 11:20 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Help with an image.


"Shadow Dancer..."

I'd rather not alter your image so here are my suggestions-

Remove the top row of windows...Crop tighter left/right to eliminate all the space not framed by the window light. (In other words, save only the six centered window panes and the dancer).

On second thought-a picture is worth a thousand words? (I just cropped, but should be straitened too).

Here is how I see the image-"Shadow Dancer"

http://agargani.smugmug.com/photos/i-sNGFpCx/0/L/i-sNGFpCx-L.jpg

Or this-

http://agargani.smugmug.com/photos/i-CsZXrpW/0/L/i-CsZXrpW-L.jpg



Mar 08, 2015 at 11:59 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Help with an image.


Trying to give some mood. Not sure what msg you are looking for.
The second one may be too much for you. Not what you saw for sure. Just having fun with a really fine photo
I just used your posted photo.
Socrate




Hit by a sun ray






Dancing with the sun




Mar 08, 2015 at 02:17 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Help with an image.


Hello Greg

I see it like this.....














Mar 08, 2015 at 04:14 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Help with an image.


Thanks Anthony. I like 'Shadow Dancer' and your 2nd crop.

And thank you Socrate. I like your 1st one better.

Great suggestions.

Thanks again

Greg



Mar 08, 2015 at 04:53 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Help with an image.


Thanks Almass. Very interesting, as usual. I like how you are able to see this by looking at the original image. I am challenged in that way.

Thanks again.

Greg



Mar 08, 2015 at 04:56 PM





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