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p.2 #3 · p.2 #3 · CRITIQUE: The Five Seasons of Songbirds - REVISED +1a | |
arbitrage wrote:
Okay here goes my comments and critique:
#!: Love snowy backgrounds, nothing better than that. Because of lower, flatter light, micro contrast is lower on this one compared to say the downy in #2. Still nice and sharp, good head angle. I would maybe add some room in front of him (left side) as he feels a bit centred (not helped by having that tail stick out right).
#2: Love everything, green background is so smooth and vibrant. Details and micro contrast pop on this one. Head angle is good, eye is engaging.
#3: Another super sharp, good contrast, nice background. I would have liked a little more DOF on this one to see a sharp beak all the way to the tip. I think you could give this guy a little more room around him.
#4: Another great pose, good engaging eye and head angle, good sharpness and great background. Only problem is the WB/colour is way off on this one. Looks really magenta/purple to me.
#5: Love this unique pose, some sort of mid flap/shake. Great details, nice coloured background. Only complaint is the diagonal branch on upper left. I'd clone that out if it were mine.
Thanks for sharing these BB.
I posted a new WB for #4....Show more →
Good afternoon Geoff,
You are most welcome
And I really appreciate your very explained critique!
You critique very well in your wording well done!
I redid my titmouse! Thanks for attaching yours.
So glad you liked my photos!
Have a great day and a big thank you!
BB
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