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Thank you guys. Like I said this was my first time doing the off camera flash picture and just want to improve on it because I light how this picture turned out.
heikoM wrote:
Nice ballance of flash but personally I would have made the background a bit darker. Could be improved on composition. Hair and background are floating into each other (Change your hight or use rim light). Stiff pose for my taste.
heiko
I was thinking the same thing about the hair, but then what @leethecam said was the reason I settled for how it was composed. I was thinking about the possibility of rim light, but being that is was my first time doing this type of shot I went the safe route.
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leethecam wrote:
Hair and dark line of trees is always going to be a slight issue with this location and time of day. Even dropping the camera would place the heads "popping" up a little over the tops of the trees, and dropping the camera more would have compromised the framing to ensure we didn't have the trees sprouting from the couple's necks.
For me, the composition is just fine, and we do have some separation in tones. If the OP wants to fine tune it, then perhaps a little localised dodging on either the back of the bride's hair to increase the slight rim light, or possibly dodging the line of trees to give better tonal separation would maybe add a little.
Might be worth puling down the recovery slider to get a hint more detail in the jacket and dress - again, do it locally as the rest of the image is just fine....Show more →
Thanks, I've edited it a little more.
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CW100 wrote:
I think I would have gone for a lighter background
I like how the background turned out, but I'll lighten it in lightroom to see how it turns out.
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