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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Fit Couple (CC Welcome)


This was my first time attempting to overpower the sun with my little Fuji X100S.

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http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8598/16357532000_16f6d981f8_h.jpg

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http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8624/16543917212_3becaaea73_h.jpg

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http://farm8.staticflickr.com/7313/16545027945_adca9b5b4d_h.jpg






Feb 15, 2015 at 11:01 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Fit Couple (CC Welcome)


These are nice photos, but the lighting and shadows are very distracting to me. I guess the first one is the most confusing. Everyone knows what the light source is outside, so it's kinda weird when light is coming from different directions.


Feb 17, 2015 at 03:56 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Fit Couple (CC Welcome)


I compliment your effort but the shadows / lack of shadows gives it away. All said it is a nice job anyways. Jim


Feb 17, 2015 at 04:08 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Fit Couple (CC Welcome)


you definitely overpowered the sun...the first 2 are lit similar to shots seen in running magazines


Feb 18, 2015 at 01:47 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Fit Couple (CC Welcome)


Any advice on getting rid of the shadow under her arm in the first shot?


Feb 18, 2015 at 12:16 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Fit Couple (CC Welcome)


ross.thomas wrote:
Any advice on getting rid of the shadow under her arm in the first shot?


In post or in the future? It could be done in photoshop. I would leave it, maybe lighten it a bit.
In the future maybe raise your flash higher so the shadow falls off more.



Feb 18, 2015 at 12:32 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Fit Couple (CC Welcome)


I'll pay attention more next time to where the shadows are falling. Great critique guys. You're making me better!


Feb 18, 2015 at 01:36 PM





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