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Weird. My previous comment disappeared. Let's see if it shows up later.
Anyhow....
Good to experiment. The image reads like two pictures to me. After being drawn to the brighter, colorful, in focus foreground, my eye quickly goes to the pier. There the blur is uncomfortably strong. If you crop just above the pier the image looks more natural to my eye. The pier remains out of focus, of course, but reads as background and provides a visual "stop", containing the primary subject.
Image would be stronger with more interest in the material on the shore.
Scott
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