Karl Witt Offline Upload & Sell: On
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Overall I certainly enjoyed seeing these, nice angle on them and good things going on #2!
CC thoughts.........agreeing with Ron on decentering of #1
Are you good at cloning out things?? I think maybe #2 could have less contrast perhaps. I find the vertical reflections of the reeds in the back of the subject distracting, especially the one directly above the head. It may be worth it if you so desire to work out both of the reed/stick lines at center and to the left. I might remove area from the bottom then for the overall comp.
Ron has a good eye on the last, I liked the image at first impression and did not immediately notice the sharpening artifacts and or noise. Relax the image a bit for more of a pleasing look perhaps..........I like it though
What a wonderful encountering you had here, sweet!
I will pull this rough draft down later.......hope you don't mind me tinkering
tinkering for an idea
Edited on Feb 11, 2015 at 11:11 PM · View previous versions
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