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For me, photographing dancers in a portrait session like this is different from anything else I shoot. The light is different, and the way you have to pay attention to their lines. But that's just me.
I think you did this really well, esp for your first time. No. 4 should be printed huge. Just love it. I'd probably clean up the threads on top of her pointe shoe, but other than that, love it. It's really sharp for 1/50 and ISO 4000. I really like No. 2 as well.
For me, your angle of the shot doesn't work for 5 and 7. In No. 6, the Nashville sign is just too overwhelming for me. I might bring her out away from it, shoot at a shallow depth of field to give the sign a blur, and try it like that. On 1 and 3, the window frames in the BG cause a bit of a distraction for me.
My nits are just my nits. They may not even matter to you, or another photog. Overall, this is really good. I hope you do more photo shoots with her. You have a wonderful subject there!
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