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The stream has a visual flow that's essentially a a sharpened "S curve". Above it is a natural terrain line that also guides the eye towards what seems to be an old multi-masted sailing ship. At such a small size it doesn't add much, although if printed quite large and viewed closely, it might become more important, although the buildings to the left of the ship would detract viewed that closely. I'd also suggest considering a different crop to lose the unappealing architecture on the left and better use the visual lines for a stronger composition. (Note, one trick for judging composition is to turn the image upside down. Upside down it's easier to understand the lines and content of an image as geometric abstractions rather than for their emotional and intellectual baggage.)
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