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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


WIND WIND WIND! The wind certainly didn't leave us all day, but it sure didn't stop us! We took a little stroll through south Brooklyn to grab some red velvet cupcakes. After some desert we ended up by the famous parachute drop in Coney Island. Thank you to teuta and Val for treating my assistant and I for some delicious pizza afterwards.

Comments and criticisms are always welcomed! Thanks in advance!

Some of my favorites from the shoot:

1. http://photodh.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/val+Te-1143.jpg

2. http://photodh.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/val+Te-1144.jpg

3. http://photodh.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/val+Te-1145.jpg

4. http://photodh.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/val+Te-1146.jpg

5. http://photodh.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/val+Te-1147.jpg

6. http://photodh.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/val+Te-1148.jpg

7. http://photodh.com/blog/wp-content/uploads/2015/01/val+Te-1149.jpg



Jan 19, 2015 at 03:23 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


Nice set, on #1 I would remove the stop on the top right, it creates distraction


Jan 19, 2015 at 03:36 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session



Overall, great set...but I think the post-processing is too inconsistent. The first 2 pics are great....then it looks like you started using a VSCO Polaroid 690 preset...then went back to the way you first started to process them.

I want to see more photos from this shoot. However...I'd like to see less balloons. I just think the whole balloon thing is overdone and has become cliche. Props on the white balloons tho.




Jan 19, 2015 at 04:25 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


Overall, I like the set. The last 2 stand out for me. A few crits for you: Pick #3 or #4, not both. And, I hate to be that be that guy, but #5 needs some nipple cloning!


Jan 20, 2015 at 01:59 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


Nice set.
I don't know if it is my computer screen, but their skin seems a bit yellow on the first picture.



Jan 20, 2015 at 10:49 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


I'll vote for last #7


Jan 22, 2015 at 09:47 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


On #1 is the wall curved or is that distortion?

It is kind of messing with my eyes.



Jan 22, 2015 at 09:51 AM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


Really nice photos. Although personally I can't wait until ballons are out of style.


Jan 23, 2015 at 09:31 AM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · South Brooklyn Engagement Session


DannyBostwick wrote:
Really nice photos. Although personally I can't wait until ballons are out of style.


thank you! Me neither, I just have a difficult time telling them to let them go into the clouds!!!



Jan 27, 2015 at 09:14 PM
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sgtbueno wrote:
Nice set, on #1 I would remove the stop on the top right, it creates distraction


Didn't really pay much attention to it until you pointed it out. However, now that you did, it's kinda driving me crazy

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rondphoto wrote:
Overall, great set...but I think the post-processing is too inconsistent. The first 2 pics are great....then it looks like you started using a VSCO Polaroid 690 preset...then went back to the way you first started to process them.

Yup, I did use VSCO on those. Not exactly Polaroid 690, I sometimes like to use the Fuji Astia.

Do you use any presets? Thanks for the feed!



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FullHousePhoto wrote:
Overall, I like the set. The last 2 stand out for me. A few crits for you: Pick #3 or #4, not both. And, I hate to be that be that guy, but #5 needs some nipple cloning!


thank you!! I need to step my clone game up.

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ogerisg321 wrote:
Nice set.
I don't know if it is my computer screen, but their skin seems a bit yellow on the first picture.


I'm quite happy with the skin tones, but I need to do some lens correction work on lightroom to get rid of the distortion..



DigMeTX wrote:
On #1 is the wall curved or is that distortion?

It is kind of messing with my eyes.


Yeah... I need to mess lens correction a bit more..



Jan 27, 2015 at 09:24 PM





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